A submission from Arthur Carrey, from Canada. This is the beginning of a novel of his and he's asked for advice on the opening. 

A submission from Brayden Colm of Dublin, Ireland. He wishes advice on where the story should go, and on how to better his writing as it stands now.

A submission from Adam Ellis of Indiana, United States. He asked it be made known this was a prologue to a ongoing novel of his. He also asked for any and all advice on his writing.

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